diff --git a/src/drafts/XXXX-org-mode-intro/index.org b/src/drafts/XXXX-org-mode-intro/index.org
index 82c4ff9..155fb58 100644
--- a/src/drafts/XXXX-org-mode-intro/index.org
+++ b/src/drafts/XXXX-org-mode-intro/index.org
@@ -47,10 +47,10 @@ It looks like this:
 [[./img/org-super-agenda.png]]
 
 Pretty brutalist interface which is a great thing to me.
-Distraction free interface going directly to the essential.
+Distraction free interface going to the essential.
 
-So mainly I see what I planned to do today.
-I got a few "Due Soon" tasks in case I have the time to handle those today.
+With this view, I see what I planned to do today.
+I also see a few "Due Soon" tasks in case I have the time to handle those.
 
 When I start working on a task I start a clock on it (I simply type =I=
 when my cursor is on the TODO line)