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 #+CAPTION: Utopia
 [[./utopia-s01.jpg]]
 
-I wanted to write an article about the show a lot of people around never
-saw and I believe are just great.
-[[https://www.themoviedb.org/tv/46511-utopia][Utopia (2013)]] UK version (not the US one) is one of these TV Show I
-believe deserve more attention.
+I wanted to write an article about great shows lot of people around me have
+missed.
+[[https://www.themoviedb.org/tv/46511-utopia][Utopia (2013)]] is one of these TV Shows that deserve more attention.
 
 The *filmography* is quite original.
 I have never see another film/TV show with a similar atmosphere.
 The usage of bright colors is magistral.
 Flashy yellow, green, red.
 
-The *soundtrack* is also pretty excellent and help the overall feel.
-Also not the typical soundtrack you're used to.
-A lot of originality here too.
+The *soundtrack* is also pretty surprising original and enjoyable.
 
-The *acting* is perfect.
-Actor are quite relatable, they looks and act as real people.
-Not the (super)heroes you are used to.
-We are far away from a every girl is a bimbo and every guy is a
-Chippendales.
+The *acting* is really great.
+Actors are doing a great job and are quite relatable.
+These are not the (super)heroes you are used to.
+We are far away from shows where every girl is a bimbo and every guy is a
+Chippendale.
 
-The *scenario*, in regard to the events related to COVID19 is just perfect.
-This is focused on the complotist theory.
-But this one turn out to be quite interresting and very close to the
-current events.
+The *scenario*, in regard to the recent events related to COVID19 is just perfect.
+I do not want to reveal too much.
+But let's just say the current real events are close to the events
+predicted in this show.
 
 The *Surrealistic Humor* atmosphere make the viewing experience quite
 exceptionnal.
-There is a mix between apparent nonchalance and extremely brutal violence.
-It really puts you in a surrealist feeling.
-People perform extreme violent acts as if there were no choice.
-As if the act of violence was inevitable.
+There is a mix between nonchalance and extreme violence.
+It really feels surrealist.
+In this show some people act with extreme violence as if there is no choice.
 
 As a conclusion, if you are looking for a very innovative TV show then
 search no further this one is a great original choice.